The Life of Alexis Perkins

The Life of Alexis Perkins

10-11

March 25th, 2019, 11:00 am

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EmilyAnnCoons, March 25th, 2019, 11:00 am

As Alexis comes home with Trevor, Julie, and Allea once again coming over, Elisa makes a call to Rosalia. What could she want to talk about?

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KiraMiko, March 25th, 2019, 12:03 pm

That cat's a donut XD

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Hippocampus (Guest), March 25th, 2019, 12:23 pm

Alison plays Wizards too? Man, this is gonna be one hell of a Saturday.

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EmilyAnnCoons, March 25th, 2019, 12:30 pm

@Hippocampus: Oh yes, there's a reason I had to split Saturday between Elisa and Alexis in separate chapters. Cause either story alone was a full chapter's length, so unless I wanted a 50 page chapter, I needed to break it up. Chapter 11 (which is the Saturday at Wizards) is a big chapter on its own. It's a lot of characters and story.

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Guest (Guest), March 28th, 2019, 2:48 am

@EmilyAnnCoons:


So you'd have one chapter longer than others. No biggie. I don't see anything wrong with a fifty page chapter. It even be better to have it wrapped into one package anyways.

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EmilyAnnCoons, March 30th, 2019, 11:23 am

@Guest: True, but again, as Alexis is not present for most of this chapter, I didn't feel it worked to have Alexis narrating.

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Guest (Guest), April 1st, 2019, 7:51 am

@EmilyAnnCoons:


Again with the stodgy narrator hangups. Try adopting a more laissez-passer laissez-faire attitude. Things get less complicated that way. The option of a central character as narrator is commonly taken but is in no way mandatory. A neutral observer as narrator can do just fine.

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EmilyAnnCoons, April 1st, 2019, 1:09 pm

@Guest: Actually, the idea of having the comic written from first-person narration instead of a neutral third-person narration was an active choice I made.

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Guest (Guest), April 2nd, 2019, 3:23 am

@EmilyAnnCoons:


In itself there's nothing wrong with that. But then you end up switching narrators around. You can do that. But some prefer to avoid that by using third person. Finding it less clunky.